This story is fantastic! For me, it is one of the top three spanking stories I've read. It is well paced, with good dialogue and a nice sense of humor that doesn't go overboard. The thing that sets it apart is the wonderful idea of F/M and F/F OTK paddling as a competitive sport at college level (I only remember seeing a similar concept once, and that was in a story 20 years ago)! Two of the scenes stand out in particular: the try-out for the paddling club where Alex puzzles over when the canoes will come in, which results in a lovely, surreal dialogue with Jill, and the very hot scene in coach Johnston's office where she gives some background of the new sport as she easily bends Alex to her will. The romance between Alex and Jill is cute, the story is quite erotic and my only complaint is that the story wasn't longer. It would be very fun to read about the first competition for the team...